4 responses

  1. A two beer poem actually. Can you tell?

    This is the place of the dark limb
    Inside the dead winter.
    Nothing lights its blear eyes
    But gin and gin’s deliria—
    A spring pond, a cypress for shade
    A perch pulled from water
    Like a new brain.

    Like

  2. Thanks. But it’s not me thinking like this. If it was the last line would be “Like a new nation.” So I think I’ll go with that. Less navel and more get the politics right. Sound better?

    Like

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.

%d bloggers like this: