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  1. twig snaps
    thin mountain air
    you there–?

    Speaking (beautifully in your case) of Bashō, I too have found myself writing on sound and sense, or is it on water? Either way, the question remains. Does it make a splash?

    pond water
    on the air
    a frog landing

    Regardless, I’d say your poem certainly does!


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