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  1. Wow! You’ve done it again, sir.

    The two instances of the word ‘old’ (forgive me) pairs so perfectly with the image of ‘lovers’ initials’.

    I also sense a subtlety in the choice of ‘departing’ as compared to ‘parting’. To this reader it imparts (again, forgive me) a lovely Impression of time bringing what was seperated back together. The union of those initials into a single sort of glyph.

    This one is carved in my memory. Thank you!

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    • I’m really glad you liked this one. You have a knack for reading these just as I write them. If I get a comment from you, I know I’ve done something right. :)

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