August 8th 2017

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returning
····from the garden—the hem of her skirt
········wet
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219 August 8th 2017 | bottlecap
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2 responses

  1. Again, you’ve got it! While the haiku depicts the returning, the result, the reader’s mind is recreating the skirt’s swishing from the wearer’s strides through vegetation yielding up its moisture . . .

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