two ideas of moonlit snow

snow — the tree’s shadow sharper
····························than the tree
Dec. 27th · 2012
in the moonlit snow — which is the shadow
of which?
Dec. 27th · 2012

3 responses

    • Me too.

      But still… I can’t shake the second one. where the first implies that the tree is the starting point, the second takes the shadow as the starting point, asking if the tree is real. :-) I go back and forth.

  1. I think one is simpler in its concept. The second ask the reader to work a little and without the first it might be a stretch for the reader to make the connections.

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