Sept 21 2009 • autumn equinox

haiku - as her breath slows

❧ I noticed that I also wrote an erotic haiku for the spring equinox. Perhaps I’ll make this a tradition. Sept 22, 2009 from up in Vermont.

3 responses

  1. This is different to your others… a different pace entirely…

    Love the idea that this was written for the spring equinox, though I wouldnt have picked that up from the words alone – would make a good haiga…

    Anyway, Im missing the point… its a very sexy ku, Patrick

  2. //I wouldn’t have picked that up from the words alone//

    No… I cheated by mentioning that in the title.

    In my defense, though, I’ve noticed that even the old Japanese masters used to cheat like this – occasionally. I’ve read too, that many of their haiku were situated by Haibun or part of Renga.

    So… I cheated.

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