March 24 2009 – just so

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equinox—the pearl piercing the girl’s bully button just
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March 24th | 2009

3 responses

  1. your style – and this is a very good example – is very different to all the other haiku I read.

    I enjoy seeing what you come up with next

    Im a big fan

  2. your style is certainly unique, and i’m a fan, too.

    i like this one, and yet… maybe it’s the pearl piercing the belly that bothers me some, although i don’t even know what the piece of jewellery used for belly piercing should be called…

    • //maybe it’s the pearl piercing the belly that bothers me some//

      I wasn’t sure about that either. On the other hand (and tame compared to some of Basho’s haiku) I liked the sexual pun and double-entendre. Spring is the season… :-)

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