A good Poem with pretty images, but has something in its rhythm something that doesnt have a rhythmic flow naturally. If you try to recite it aloud some word, after the second line jam.
Although, the Poem doesnt have the rhythm of the Poems you study, I apologize and have to say that is a really nice work-out.
Thanks Ciarli. The poem isn’t metrical, if that’s what you mean.
I recorded it for you, though. (Look at the bottom of the post.) Whether the rhythmic flow is going to be natural to every reader, I can’t say; but it’s natural to me. That’s one of the downsides to free verse. Sometimes a reader has to tease out a poet’s rhythm. :-)
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ha, i like this. i think it sums up the essence of the spider quite well
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A good Poem with pretty images, but has something in its rhythm something that doesnt have a rhythmic flow naturally. If you try to recite it aloud some word, after the second line jam.
Although, the Poem doesnt have the rhythm of the Poems you study, I apologize and have to say that is a really nice work-out.
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Thanks Ciarli. The poem isn’t metrical, if that’s what you mean.
I recorded it for you, though. (Look at the bottom of the post.) Whether the rhythmic flow is going to be natural to every reader, I can’t say; but it’s natural to me. That’s one of the downsides to free verse. Sometimes a reader has to tease out a poet’s rhythm. :-)
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I enjoyed the poem.
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