Opening Book: Three Haiku Page 29 November 29, 2008 By upinvermont in Gillespie, Patrick, Haiku, Opening Book, Poem, Spring, Summer Tags: crab, crab shell, dogwood, firefly, midmorning, puddles 2 Comments Advertisements Share this:TwitterEmailPrintPinterestFacebookTumblrLinkedInRedditGoogleLike this:Like Loading... Related
intriguing haiku, all of them. but i especially like “midmorning” for its openness and the many questions it leaves the reader with.. Reply
Thanks for checking in Polona. That last Haiku, Midmorning, reminds me a little of your last Haiku; that is, it’s a little more mysterious than I meant it to be. ;-) There was a comparison I was trying to make, but I didn’t succeed. Do you want the background on it, or would that ruin it? Reply
intriguing haiku, all of them. but i especially like “midmorning” for its openness and the many questions it leaves the reader with..
Thanks for checking in Polona.
That last Haiku, Midmorning, reminds me a little of your last Haiku; that is, it’s a little more mysterious than I meant it to be. ;-)
There was a comparison I was trying to make, but I didn’t succeed. Do you want the background on it, or would that ruin it?