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Opening Book: Unbidden Page 78 (Final Poem of the Book)

December 28, 2008 upinvermont Leave a comment

Page 78 Unbidden

Opening Book: The Green Gate Page 74-76

December 25, 2008 upinvermont 2 comments

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Opening Book: Three Haiku Page 73

December 25, 2008 upinvermont Leave a comment

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Opening Book: Given Page 72

December 22, 2008 upinvermont 1 comment
  • [The 3rd line in the 4th Stanza should read: Still never makes me wonder less.]

 

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Opening Book: All Hallows’ Eve Pages 62-71 (Part 3 of 3)

December 21, 2008 upinvermont Leave a comment

Continuing Part II.

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Opening Book: All Hallows’ Eve Page 52-61 (Post 2 of 3)

December 20, 2008 upinvermont Leave a comment

Continuing Part I.

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End of Part II

Continue Part III

Opening Book: All Hallows’ Eve Page 43-51 (Post 1 of 3)

December 19, 2008 upinvermont 1 comment

The first third of the narrative poem – All Hallows’ Eve. I wrote it as a way to teach myself Blank Verse. There were several years between the start and the finish – though I wasn’t working on it all that time. The poem was inspired by Keats’ Hyperion. I wanted to match its length and bring blank verse back to narrative. If you here any instructor, critic or reader bemoaning the death of narrative blank verse, send them here! It’s alive and well in me and my poems. Page 43 All Hallows' Eve

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End of Part I

Continue Part II

Opening Book: Page 23 Something Within

December 16, 2008 upinvermont Leave a comment

Page 23 Something Within

Opening Book: Come Out! Page 41-42

December 12, 2008 upinvermont Leave a comment
  • I changed a line in this poem:

From: From off the floor where still its veins had bled.
To: Off the floor where still its veins bled through.

  • I think this was my twentieth try at reading this. What I would really love is for an actress or another reader, a woman preferably, to give it a try. If there are any takers, and if you like the poem enough, let me know.

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Opening Book: Spring Lyric Page 40

December 11, 2008 upinvermont Leave a comment

Page 40 Spring Lyric