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You and I ❧ a little love poem

June 28, 2009 upinvermont Leave a comment Go to comments

Of all I know
I know this to be true:
Wherever I go,
I will go with you.

Death cannot sever,
love cannot die.
We will last forever
you and I.

❧ You and I

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  1. Shivya
    June 30, 2009 at 1:46 pm | #1
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    Simple and nice :)

    I like your blog. Rolling you!

  2. aarzoo
    July 3, 2009 at 2:49 pm | #2
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    just tripped into ur blog from Aadil’s blog…quite impressed with ur work.

    and the thoughts are so innocent n pure..will be visiting again..bless you.

    • upinvermont
      July 3, 2009 at 3:02 pm | #3
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      Thanks Aarzoo, I don’t know about innocent and pure. It’s too late for that. I would settle for simple and good. : )

  3. Joy A. Burki-Watson
    September 14, 2009 at 7:03 am | #4
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    This is a very profound poem when one has experienced the loss and also felt the sense of gain. Short and well-shared! joy

    • upinvermont
      September 14, 2009 at 7:18 am | #5
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      I’m glad you liked it. I’ve always been partial to that little poem.

      In the meantime, I corrected my post on Roethke and made sure to credit you with catching the mistake. : )

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